04-02-2020, 01:00 AM
This was a deep poem. I definitely could feel the emotion as I read through each line. I love the imagery of money woven throughout each stanza. I thought the use of money as a metaphor to express the way the poet was being treated was expressed very clearly and jumped out quite distinctly. I also liked the theme of love--which like money, interest, stocks, etc.--can be a loss or a gain. Anyway, I liked your poem
