03-03-2020, 06:36 AM
Emily the death of me (revised: Duke, tiger, jmweise, knot)
“Because I could not stop for Death” *
he would not stop for me
refusing pleas for extra time
he took unwilling me.
So please take heed my mortal friends
and yield your foolish pride
and if you greet him properly
he just might let you slide.
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original
“Because I could not stop for Death” *
he would not stop for me
refusing pleas for more time
he took unwilling me.
So please take heed my mortal friends
yield your foolish pride
and if you greet him properly
he just might let you slide.
*direct quote from Dickinson 479 first line
©2010 erthona
“Because I could not stop for Death” *
he would not stop for me
refusing pleas for extra time
he took unwilling me.
So please take heed my mortal friends
and yield your foolish pride
and if you greet him properly
he just might let you slide.
________________________________
original
“Because I could not stop for Death” *
he would not stop for me
refusing pleas for more time
he took unwilling me.
So please take heed my mortal friends
yield your foolish pride
and if you greet him properly
he just might let you slide.
*direct quote from Dickinson 479 first line
©2010 erthona
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.