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Demons
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02-08-2020, 09:05 AM
I really like the rhymes, but sometimes it may get cheesy 'and nothing white remains', 'truth that I would hide' but its nice and interesting in the 4th block ending in gold. And 'which' at the end doesn't seem to work in my mind. What about 'since silence always wins'. Anyways hope this helps thank you for posting
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Demons - by spocktorock - 02-08-2020, 08:54 AM
RE: Demons - by CRNDLSM - 02-08-2020, 09:05 AM
RE: Demons - by rowens - 02-15-2020, 02:11 AM
RE: Demons - by spocktorock - 02-15-2020, 02:33 AM
RE: Demons - by rowens - 02-15-2020, 02:40 AM
RE: Demons - by Brian Roberts - 03-08-2020, 12:16 AM
RE: Demons - by Knot - 04-02-2020, 03:08 AM
RE: Demons - by Erthona - 04-02-2020, 09:30 AM
RE: Demons - by LSClanton - 04-04-2020, 03:10 AM
RE: Demons - by whyelliswhy - 06-05-2020, 12:35 AM
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