Her gracefulness

[Knot]

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Hi Sonata,
while there is much to like, I think you could cut the second stanza entirely, and perhaps trim the final one ('found', for instance, 'implies 'lost',
making it redundant).  Just a thought.

Oh Lord, I am finally found
in her eyes. Her gracefulness
buried deep inside me. ?


I'd also reconsider 'old' - not a comparison one is likely to enjoy?
(And, maybe, a more interesting title?)


Best, Knot


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