01-09-2020, 02:57 PM
(10-25-2019, 08:50 AM)Renfri Wrote: CHRISTMAS DINNERIt's good practice to post edits above the original piece instead of overwriting the whole thing, so that readers can trace the evolution of the poem
Disintegration happened rapidly,
As it impacted the concrete floor:
porcelain cracked, exposing dull clay.
Leftover turkey stopped making sense,
when the plate lost its primary purpose.
It was dirt with no history of dinner.
Broken pieces scattered in turmoil,
rough edges with no particular shape.
were now warnings of a weapon,
each sharpened to carve.
Inaction can slice someone’s feet.


