The Wanderer

[Thunderembargo]

Unsightly and unseen,                    great start to this poem
I trespass in dream.
A wanderer wondering 
If my shadow is seen.                     this is an intriguing query
Silent and solitaire,
I solemnly stare
In the darkness of dream,                    you should pluralize dream in order to contrast with the first singular use of the same
Like an unheard scream.
With a voyeur’s gaze
And eyes ablaze
All thoughts are mined                    it is unclear to me what you are suggesting in this line
In this peep show of mind.              voyeurism, is interesting, yet broad, the idea that your dreams are somehow transparent should be explained,                                                      yet generally the mind, itself, is much more complex than the flesh market of a peep show.    if this is some                                                          kind of waking dream, through sexual  escapade , you should explain the mechanism for this exchange                                                                between dream-like deviants or pscyophants.   you could perhaps use the loaded term, "sadism" in order to                                                          capture the shadowy scene which you seemingly alluding towards