Generation Next
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Hi Embee,
some strong stuff here, but a terrible title. Smile
(Just read your explantion to pinprick, it makes sense, but I'm not sure who will get it).

I could perhaps be tauter/tighter.

Just a thought


Custodian of Auschwitz,
Europes's shtetles,
[progeny] of D.P. camps.

remnant, burdened
by birth
[from] burial mounds

I am the prayer
[of] tattooed numbers
burning blue into the future.


Best, Knot.


ps. The 'gentile' pun was very nice too. Smile



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Messages In This Thread
Generation Next - by EmBee - 12-30-2019, 12:15 AM
RE: Generation Next - by rowens - 12-30-2019, 01:35 PM
RE: Generation Next - by RecoveryWarrior - 12-30-2019, 09:23 PM
RE: Generation Next - by billy - 12-31-2019, 11:28 AM
RE: Generation Next - by EmBee - 01-01-2020, 05:38 AM
RE: Generation Next - by Poet26389 - 01-03-2020, 04:15 PM
RE: Generation Next - by Pinprick - 01-05-2020, 12:02 PM
RE: Generation Next - by EmBee - 01-05-2020, 11:38 PM
RE: Generation Next - by Knot - 01-06-2020, 02:28 AM
RE: Generation Next - by audrey - 01-18-2020, 08:25 AM
RE: Generation Next - by bbcashdollar - 02-05-2020, 04:56 AM



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