01-06-2020, 02:28 AM
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ps. The 'gentile' pun was very nice too.
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Hi Embee,
some strong stuff here, but a terrible title. 

(Just read your explantion to pinprick, it makes sense, but I'm not sure who will get it).
I could perhaps be tauter/tighter.
Just a thought
Custodian of Auschwitz,
I could perhaps be tauter/tighter.
Just a thought
Custodian of Auschwitz,
Europes's shtetles,
[progeny] of D.P. camps.
remnant, burdened
remnant, burdened
by birth
[from] burial mounds
I am the prayer
I am the prayer
[of] tattooed numbers
burning blue into the future.
Best, Knot.
Best, Knot.
ps. The 'gentile' pun was very nice too.

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