Cool (edit 4)
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Cool

light clinging to snowflakes
snow sticking to everything
a picturesque squall, a travel ban 
and the roads were ours
swerving across medians
spinning through intersections 

a high school thrill ride, me, Marty, Red
the exuberant terror young men crave
our battle
our turf

tires skating under street lights
boys hurtling towards snow banks
in the back Marty squeals
You're so cool!

instinctively I palm the wheel
focused on the physics of steel
steering clear of piled snow

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Our Rites

light clinging to snowflakes
snow sticking to everything
a picturesque squall 
and the road was ours
swerving across medians
spinning through intersections 

a high school thrill ride
me, Marty, Red
the exuberant terror
young men crave
our battle
our turf

four tires skating
under street lights
three boys hurtling 
at snow banks

in the back
Marty squealed
"You're so cool!" 

as instinctively 
I palmed the wheel
focused on the physics
of steel flying towards snow

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Cool

a January squall
light clinging to snowflakes
snow sticking to everything

we had the road to ourselves
swerving across medians
spinning through intersections 

a high school thrill ride
me, Marty, Red
the exuberant terror
young men crave
our battle
our turf

4 tires skating
under street lights
3 boys hurtling 
towards snow banks

from the back seat
"You're so cool!," 
Marty squealed

as unconsciously 
I palmed the wheel
oblivious to everything
but the Physics
of steel towards snow


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Cool

light clinging to snowflakes
snow clinging to everything

we had the road to ourselves
swerving across medians
spinning through intersections 

a high school thrill ride
me, Marty, Red
the exuberant terror
young men crave
our battle
our turf

4 tires skating
under street lights
3 boys hurtling 
towards snow banks

this is no cautionary tale
"You're so cool!," 
Marty squealed

as unconsciously 
I palmed the wheel
oblivious to everything
but the geometry
of steel towards snow
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Messages In This Thread
Cool (edit 4) - by bbcashdollar - 12-07-2019, 01:09 AM
RE: Cool - by billy - 12-09-2019, 10:03 AM
RE: Cool - by bbcashdollar - 12-09-2019, 08:39 PM
RE: Cool - by Knot - 12-10-2019, 12:19 AM
RE: Cool (edit 2) - by Vikiirna - 12-10-2019, 03:20 PM
RE: Cool (edit 2) - by bbcashdollar - 12-10-2019, 07:48 PM
RE: Cool (edit 3- Our Rites) - by Vikiirna - 12-11-2019, 11:53 AM
RE: Cool (edit 3- Our Rites) - by Knot - 12-11-2019, 11:52 PM
RE: Cool (edit 3- Our Rites) - by audrey - 01-17-2020, 08:18 AM
RE: Cool (edit 3- Our Rites) - by bbcashdollar - 01-22-2020, 03:48 AM



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