Old Flame - edit 1 (Formerly Faint Hope)

[Tiger the Lion]

Hey WJ. A quick thought on first read...

A sliver remains,
the final slice of pie 
at the back of your fridge
beside a jar of pickles
you got the week you moved in. 

The crust is soggy and the taste's dulled, I think this line belongs in future tense since you are describing the last slice which is yet to be eaten
- consider... the crust will be soggy and the taste dulled
but it's nice to know something's there
if you feel like something sweet. 

Thanks for the read. I'll be back.