11-09-2019, 10:34 PM
I like this, the content is both thought provoking and interesting.
I don’t think it would be fair for me to critique this as I’m new to poetry and not sure I can add much?
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Hello,
Please read the rules of each forum before posting. A simple "I like this" is not valid critique. "I can't critique this" is also not valid critique. Please try again.
(Don't over think it. Your critique doesn't have to find problems, you can say positive things if positive things are all you can find. However, you must go more in depth. Why does it work for you? What words or phrases specifically did you like? Why? If you are new to critique, the basic forum is the perfect place to start, we won't criticize you if you fumble a bit. The only wrong answer in here is to not try.)
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New to giving critique? Please read these tips:
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-14811.html
Critique/Feedback-Giving and Getting it:
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-6438.html
--Quix/admin
I don’t think it would be fair for me to critique this as I’m new to poetry and not sure I can add much?
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Hello,
Please read the rules of each forum before posting. A simple "I like this" is not valid critique. "I can't critique this" is also not valid critique. Please try again.

(Don't over think it. Your critique doesn't have to find problems, you can say positive things if positive things are all you can find. However, you must go more in depth. Why does it work for you? What words or phrases specifically did you like? Why? If you are new to critique, the basic forum is the perfect place to start, we won't criticize you if you fumble a bit. The only wrong answer in here is to not try.)

Check out these links for some tips on critique:
New to giving critique? Please read these tips:
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-14811.html
Critique/Feedback-Giving and Getting it:
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-6438.html
--Quix/admin