Lovers Quarrel

[Pinprick]

To begin with, you seem to have some issue with the font you’re trying to use, which makes this nearly impossible to read. Secondly, if I’m seeing things correctly, the punctuation needs corrected. I’m sure spellcheck can help you with that. Thirdly, this feels very adolescent; like the type of poem that an inexperienced teenager would write. There are a lot of cliches, and the rhyming seems uncreative and often forced.