Modern Love
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Very fine. The concluding stanza, in particular, is deeply satisfying.

I find myself thinking of your screen as the veil (of ignorance, as in ethics) as well as other possible images.

As to love as sacred... perhaps we ascribe love to God because, on the premise that He has emotions at all, they must be as incomprehensible and inscrutable to us as (human) love is.
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Modern Love - by RiverNotch - 10-29-2019, 03:12 PM
RE: Modern Love - by dukealien - 10-31-2019, 10:20 PM
RE: Modern Love - by RiverNotch - 11-04-2019, 12:44 PM
RE: Modern Love - by busker - 11-06-2019, 07:26 AM
RE: Modern Love - by RiverNotch - 11-06-2019, 02:58 PM



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