10-30-2019, 10:55 PM
Really appreciate this, thank you. The limerick was unintentional and I didn’t notice it, but I can simplify the line to avoid it. I will definitely edit this one. I asked about the ending because I thought it was somewhat vague as to whether or not the N is the perpetrator, or a bystander that witnessed the act and is experiencing trauma, which I didn’t mind, but didn’t want it to be distracting or confusing for the reader.