I haven't fucked in a while

I haven't fucked in a while

Emmaishappy Offline

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10-15-2019, 07:28 PM

Subtle, yet beautifully constructed. I personally would have liked the title - I haven't made love in a while. This would widen your audience and match the content of the poem. Just my pref. Nice!

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I haven't fucked in a while - by cloud - 10-01-2019, 02:43 PM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by dukealien - 10-01-2019, 10:47 PM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by busker - 10-02-2019, 03:20 AM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by busker - 10-02-2019, 12:29 PM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by Bunx - 10-09-2019, 12:33 AM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by Emmaishappy - 10-15-2019, 07:28 PM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by ISawASpaceship - 09-29-2021, 11:32 PM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by bob@mancity.net - 10-14-2023, 06:52 AM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by Fearful Symmetry - 10-14-2023, 08:06 AM

RE: I haven't fucked in a while - by rayheinrich - 10-16-2023, 07:02 AM

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