10-15-2019, 07:03 PM
I found the poem to be a rant about different types of people you come across in life. There was a little philosophy used with the arrangement of each section (Expectations of life through the people you meet on this journey). Did you separate each section for a reason? I don't think you needed too, or perhaps change the arrangement into 5 lines per section. This conflicts with free form poetry (So with respects it could be your style?). Some very vivid imagery and I like the line (To beat them, to reduce them to ashes,
To even give them death).
To even give them death).
Lover of words
