10-14-2019, 10:13 PM
I have to say that you achieve a sound quite epic, although the rhyme scheme seems a little bit forced. It has a mysterious tone that I like but at the same time it´s difficult to fully understand, but I can get the general sense and the feeling of the poem. One of my favourite phrases was "Charming the masses through hypnotic glasses", it sounds very powerful. Well, the poem in general sounds very powerful, and it makes me think a lot, a definitely mysterious piece.