10-10-2019, 03:37 AM
It means nothing at all but that I meant in some sections you resorted to word painting, which isn't wrong with anything. Painting with sounds and images, meaning just what it says. It's not bad. I guess it's a light pastoral prison cell, and why not? It goes with the solace in the title. . . . Some might say it says too much in places, and not enough in others, but we can't balance all our effects on customed standards. . . . I was wondering about where it says his prison cell exist, and where it says, well, the last line as last he dines.