09-22-2019, 11:11 PM
(09-21-2019, 11:36 PM)AlexTheAsian21 Wrote: Hold no reviews back.
Fight THE MAN
It’s okay to be different, it’s often for the greater,
those who pretend to agree, are usually just a hater,
that will stab you in the back, and leave you all alone,
they will crap on all your dreams, and fap all in your zone,
it’s okay to be different, don’t try to be like the rest,
live, love, learn, and always try you best,
if ever there is a time, to give in and join the crowd,
stand tall with confidence, and lead them loud and proud.
Great job smashing so many cliches into a overly cliche'd subject. The rhymes are too easy to be interesting, with the exception of fap and crap. Even THE MAN has become a different entity over time and I don't believe is defined well enough in the 'fight' .
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