Finite Days

[AlexTheAsian21]

This is my first poem I’m posting on here. Not really sure what my goal is but let me know what you like and what you don’t like.
Revision 1
There are days filled with sorrow, and days without power,
there are days without sunshine, and days of constant shower,
there are days I ask for forgiveness, and days I hide in shame,
there are days when I’m alone, and days where I’m to blame,
for all the nasty curses, they all throw on my soul,
there are days where I feel empty, days I wish were whole,
there are days filled with happiness, and days with endless joy,
there are days where I feel complete, like when I was a boy,
and all the struggles in the world, never affected my tune,
I’d run, play, kick, scream, and never feel like a buffoon,
there are days upon days that make up our spirit,
there are days upon days that we desperately need to hear it,
there are days that are good, and days that are bad,
always remember to cherish the days that are to be had.

There are days filled with sorrow, and days filled with pain,
There are days without sunshine, and days of constant rain,
There are days I ask for forgiveness, and days I hide in shame,
There are days when I’m alone, and days where I’m to blame,
For all the nasty curses, they all throw on my name,
There are days I wish were different, I know you’ve felt the same,
There are days filled with happiness, and days filled with joy,
There are days where I feel complete, like when I was a boy,
And all the struggles in the world, never got me down,
I would run, play, kick, scream, without feeling like a clown,
There are days upon days that make up our life,
There are days upon days that add to all the strife,
There are days that are good, and days that are bad,
Always remember to cherish the days that are to be had.
ALEXTHEASIAN21