2nd Draft: Homeward Bound

[Knot]

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Hi Alex,

in answer to your questions:

I'm not really clear on why "unhidden" is the wrong word. It conveys exactly what I want it to in its definition.

I suppose it the unconventional usage, and the fact that a synonym, like 'displayed' would give a little alliterative lift with 'darkened'

Using the binomial name seems as adult as "works of architects" no?

Perhaps, but it seemed to me the binomial was something N might have been taught in school, whereas the phrase 'works of architects' was not.

Best, Knot

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