09-07-2019, 03:03 AM
Not sure if my feedbacks worth much, but I really liked this. The feeling of cold and isolation hit me straight away. The meter on ‘and then again, I asked, is this, The way to go?’ Felt a little off. As the above suggested, just ‘is this the way to go.’ Works much better I think. Also the last Stanza again feels a little out from the rest. The imagery is amazing, but the meter again feels a little lost.