09-07-2019, 01:58 AM
I'm new to this, so please go easy! Would love to get some feedback.
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The morning came, he sat parked up,
As he’d done for months before.
Whilst outside the snow was falling and thick,
He crawled through what he saw.
Motionless and lost, the frost encased,
The questions of what they'd done.
His mind reminded him, he screamed,
Over what they’d made him become.
Outside he saw someone stood still,
He froze like a sighted deer,
She walked to the window and tapped, you ok?
He was anything but, this was clear.
She asked him if he wanted to walk,
It’d be good to get some air.
He talked to her of his last few months,
Understating the despair.
He asked her if she was from there,
She said she’d been there a while.
She told him about all kinds of things,
And warmed him through her smile.
They walked for hours,
She laughed, he beamed,
They stopped and closer drew.
Until he thought of her again.
She killed it.
And killed this too.
_____________________
The morning came, he sat parked up,
As he’d done for months before.
Whilst outside the snow was falling and thick,
He crawled through what he saw.
Motionless and lost, the frost encased,
The questions of what they'd done.
His mind reminded him, he screamed,
Over what they’d made him become.
Outside he saw someone stood still,
He froze like a sighted deer,
She walked to the window and tapped, you ok?
He was anything but, this was clear.
She asked him if he wanted to walk,
It’d be good to get some air.
He talked to her of his last few months,
Understating the despair.
He asked her if she was from there,
She said she’d been there a while.
She told him about all kinds of things,
And warmed him through her smile.
They walked for hours,
She laughed, he beamed,
They stopped and closer drew.
Until he thought of her again.
She killed it.
And killed this too.