Stargazing

[Kng]

Hi ginaparaoan, I really like the theme of this piece and the anthropomorphism of the subject. To me, the 4 stanzas seem to describe 4 different stages in the "life" of the comet -- if that's what you're going for, I'd suggest using the first two lines of each stanza to introduce an comparison or analogy, then perhaps the last two to strengthen it and tie it in to the next idea. Hope this helps!