Blue-Screen Portal

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I haven't much to say about this, that's a good and a bad thing. It reads well, but I needed to re-read it to extract all it had to offer me, which I think with your level of word placement, you can do better.
make me realize its special while I'm reading, not after I've finished.

A still bay ripples,
boats tell a great deal
from where-beens to where-ares
water quells darkness now this is a CHOP. At first these two lines seemed out of place, but I could not find where else they would fit, and so they actually stand beautifully alone
with blue.

Depths divide us, I wouldn't use 'divide' here, depth provides room for connection - maybe the depths allow things to appear more distant than they actually are
most never see
those pretty little rocks at the bottom.
Only the sun's sparkle
on the surface.

A pleasant view to all,
yet there's something special
about a journey to great depths
just to come back
with a pretty little rock
for all to admire,
all but you.  normally I'd enjoy this closer, but you made the beautiful watery depths a personal feud or something with 'you'.
 it leads me to believe everything is a metaphor which hurts me a lot because now I've been tricked into thinking this was about water  not bad at all.

good job!