08-08-2019, 07:30 PM
I can really relate to this poem, and I'm positive I'm not the only one. I love how you were very confident to post this very raw poem. I also appreciate the attempt in your setting. It really resonated with me. I can see you felt this was inexpressible due to 'Overthinking' but I really love that you took the chance to let your guard down. Favorite line was " Forcing a house in your head " when I read that I imagine a person who tends to over analyze who is trying to picture more happier settings in their mind. I may have interpreted wrong, but I am happy to understand from your POV. Either way, loved it!
- MindlMatter
