07-30-2019, 10:07 AM
As a person who also overthinks everything, I can really relate to the first stanza. Also thnk that negatively mental would be a better title. I argee with Knot that ending at ‘corpse’ makes the poem stronger.
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Overthinking - by ginaparaoan - 03-04-2019, 09:18 PM
RE: Overthinking - by rowens - 03-04-2019, 09:46 PM
RE: Overthinking - by billy - 03-05-2019, 08:10 AM
RE: Overthinking - by P3t3rW1ll14m - 03-07-2019, 05:58 AM
RE: Overthinking - by Knot - 03-12-2019, 10:05 PM
RE: Overthinking - by ginaparaoan - 03-14-2019, 11:51 AM
RE: Overthinking - by MadelineN - 04-25-2019, 10:58 PM
RE: Overthinking - by EMK - 07-30-2019, 10:07 AM
RE: Overthinking - by mindlmatter - 08-08-2019, 07:30 PM
RE: Overthinking - by Seraphim - 08-09-2019, 03:42 AM
RE: Overthinking - by ginaparaoan - 08-11-2019, 09:17 AM
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