07-24-2019, 12:59 PM
for me you're trying to mate an apple with a ladder. the can only be seperate. kelly mindset sets his life story as does his mask which was just a tool. he took it off among his peers which eliot's lot never did. his hell was nothing like eliots. some good lines in the poem but i couldn't tie kelly to the wasteland. kelly's life was carnal and raw. it was real do and die. his life was immortalised as an individual. he was a hero.still is to many.
(07-03-2019, 05:40 PM)Oden Prufrock Wrote: Empty Kelly
Metal syndicated shell, why is it syndicated?
slits to see the horror,
Prufrock’s pitied prudent hell, i get it's about kelly but i struggle to see how you connect him to prufrock. ned kelly would never wish to talk of angelo, porcelain, and marmalade tea. kelly would never have seen eliot's horror/s
hid behind the barrier,
cicadas’ Venitian carnival Venetian
where masks constrict like vines, this is the main part which i struggle with. the mask of kelly was worn for different reasons. i feel you're trying to connect two worlds that are so far apart that they could never be married unless ned was there to rob them.
processions forward to a funeral
hidden by concrete time.