07-23-2019, 10:48 AM
(07-22-2019, 08:47 PM)Seraphim Wrote: I did research him after Churinga mentioned the name, but as written the poem is going to make sense to an extremely limited audience. To widen that audience, it’s going to need more narrative - at least enough so the reader needs to know who to research for further info.Well it was aimed at an Australian audience so I don't see the problem. Everyone knows of Venice and its carnival of masks and this is especially so when the images are paired offering just enough clarity. Can you tell me what you think the meaning of the lines is?