07-14-2019, 09:32 AM
Not many would know this is about Ned Kelly.
'Venetian' unless you are punning on the Latin 'venit'. If you are, it is very obscure.
'concrete' is too modern for Kelly's era. The word not the substance.
I would not put hell in bold, since it is a formal poem.
Clever slant rhymes and use of language.
cheers
Ross
'Venetian' unless you are punning on the Latin 'venit'. If you are, it is very obscure.
'concrete' is too modern for Kelly's era. The word not the substance.
I would not put hell in bold, since it is a formal poem.
Clever slant rhymes and use of language.
cheers
Ross