07-12-2019, 06:12 AM
Sorry I missed your question
My hot /air Balloon /will car/ry me |. Where/ver it wants /to go
A line of iambs split by an anapest give this a nice lilting feel which goes along with the concept of a balloon. Then it stops.
1. 3. 1. 2. 3. 1. 3. 1. 3. 1. 3. 1. 2. 3. 1. 3
My hot air Balloon will carry me | Wherever it wants to go
Note the smooth rises during the anapests as opposed to the metrical bounce of the iambs
My hot /air Balloon /will car/ry me |. Where/ver it wants /to go
A line of iambs split by an anapest give this a nice lilting feel which goes along with the concept of a balloon. Then it stops.
1. 3. 1. 2. 3. 1. 3. 1. 3. 1. 3. 1. 2. 3. 1. 3
My hot air Balloon will carry me | Wherever it wants to go
Note the smooth rises during the anapests as opposed to the metrical bounce of the iambs
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot