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Blowing Steam from napm 12
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07-12-2019, 03:31 AM
I appreciate the critiques, I will work on an edit, if only the caps at the beginning, Billy's right about some words just filling space but in a ramble of thought it's not a bad thing. I didn't know what a concrete poem was and thought I was being original with forms as an emotional conveyance over words, I learn something with every post, and I appreciate it thank yo
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by CRNDLSM - 06-22-2019, 08:15 AM
RE: Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by Seraphim - 06-22-2019, 11:33 AM
RE: Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by CRNDLSM - 06-22-2019, 12:11 PM
RE: Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by billy - 06-22-2019, 12:52 PM
RE: Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by churinga - 06-23-2019, 07:00 PM
RE: Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by Shelleshell13 - 07-11-2019, 11:09 PM
RE: Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by CRNDLSM - 07-12-2019, 03:31 AM
RE: Blowing Steam from napm 12 - by Seraphim - 07-12-2019, 06:12 AM
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