07-10-2019, 10:33 PM
Thanks for the comments billy. I appreciate seeing it from your POV. You’ve pointed out the areas of ambiguity which are often difficult for the writer to see.
The words in bold were to indicate where I revised from the previous revision. They are not a part of the poem lol.
The words in bold were to indicate where I revised from the previous revision. They are not a part of the poem lol.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot