Pradeshi Police
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The false ember
You are curious, you follow to the police station, curiousity is not deceptive, so I question the use of 'false'.

The rest is interesting, it is reportage and a blend of violence, comedy and pathos. Not great poetry but well observed.

all the best

Ross
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Pradeshi Police - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-29-2018, 07:17 PM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by dukealien - 05-30-2018, 10:15 AM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-30-2018, 03:55 PM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by Knot - 05-31-2018, 04:01 AM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by Radetof.Yahska - 06-09-2018, 05:59 AM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by Knot - 06-10-2018, 12:53 AM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by billy - 06-29-2019, 11:42 AM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by churinga - 07-09-2019, 09:52 AM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by Radetof.Yahska - 10-08-2020, 07:27 AM
RE: Pradeshi Police - by Knot - 10-08-2020, 08:27 PM



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