Promotion
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A slug has the connotation of a bullet, 'makes tears' is not very convincing either sonically or syntactically. 'A face squeezing with blood' again supports the notion of a slug in both senses.
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Promotion - by Oden Prufrock - 07-06-2019, 08:56 PM
RE: Promotion - by CRNDLSM - 07-07-2019, 11:23 PM
RE: Promotion - by churinga - 07-08-2019, 02:38 AM
RE: Promotion - by Richard - 07-28-2019, 11:02 AM



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