07-07-2019, 08:26 AM
A nice epigrammatic ending.
"Bier" is a minor blemish on an otherwise engaging poem.
I liked how you went into some relatable specifics in the below list:
"They meant he might
have less deducted, alimony, tax,
more time in grade, years prior service, or
incentive pay for special skills he’d learned."
"Bier" is a minor blemish on an otherwise engaging poem.
I liked how you went into some relatable specifics in the below list:
"They meant he might
have less deducted, alimony, tax,
more time in grade, years prior service, or
incentive pay for special skills he’d learned."