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A Dead Man’s Poem
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07-06-2019, 06:16 AM
Overall, this comes across as a list of over-modified - sometimes confusing/sometimes cliche-ish - images, too heavy on the alliteration, which attempts to come to an anti-climatic epiphany. It took a couple of attempts to wade through the lines. It took a bit of effort.
I wish I could be more enthusiastic.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot
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A Dead Man’s Poem - by Oden Prufrock - 07-05-2019, 04:34 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Seraphim - 07-06-2019, 06:16 AM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Oden Prufrock - 07-06-2019, 10:26 AM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Quixilated - 07-06-2019, 01:49 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Oden Prufrock - 07-06-2019, 07:51 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Seraphim - 07-06-2019, 04:04 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by one lass - 07-07-2019, 03:43 AM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by churinga - 07-07-2019, 06:41 AM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Oden Prufrock - 07-07-2019, 02:38 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by churinga - 07-07-2019, 04:06 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by busker - 07-07-2019, 04:24 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Oden Prufrock - 07-24-2019, 05:37 AM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by busker - 08-11-2019, 04:24 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Oden Prufrock - 08-13-2019, 05:31 AM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by billy - 07-24-2019, 12:42 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by Oden Prufrock - 07-24-2019, 08:41 PM
RE: A Dead Man’s Poem - by abu nuwas - 07-25-2019, 09:22 PM
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