07-05-2019, 05:52 AM
Good images, catchy beat (conversational reading). Not sure I agree with changing/opening up "myself" in S2: the rest of the lyric is entirely centered on the speaker, it would jar a little to bring in friends or companions at just that one spot. On the other hand, it could be an uphill-to-there and then downhill back to self-centeredness.
Quite enjoyable. Thanks!
Quite enjoyable. Thanks!
Non-practicing atheist

