07-03-2019, 01:32 PM
S1 just seems a rant against Christianity. The imagery is jumbled and doesn’t connect in any meaningful way. Liked the last line in S1, but nothing really leads up to it, nor does it provide any epiphany.
S2 makes no plausible sense whatsoever. What the “dark satanic mills” of England have to with anything that follows is beyond me. I’m guess it has some meaning to you, but you’re not conveying it to the reader.
S2 makes no plausible sense whatsoever. What the “dark satanic mills” of England have to with anything that follows is beyond me. I’m guess it has some meaning to you, but you’re not conveying it to the reader.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot