07-02-2019, 09:32 AM
While the title clued me in this was about a food item, I can find no way to relate the poem to the topic. I’m down with some obscurity in a work, used for a specific purpose, but when obscurity obfuscates the meaning, I feel you’re wasting the reader’s time.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot

