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Hi Ser
I never noticed the one syllable line S3L1, I always feel blessed when someone keeps me honest.
'tap my spine' refers to meditation, on the chakras, the cabalistic tree of life.
I think the last verse does connect to the rest in the sense that my life is solitary but then I'm occasionally invited out.
I doubt it will be revised. I post in the spirit of, 'I'm still learning and the next poem will reflect this.'

thanks for commenting

all the best

Ross