6-26-19
#4
I like concept, but not sure if personification works in haiku. So we’ll call it something else lol.

I see it as kind of a green leaf vs brown leaf thing. A lot of dead soldiers fall to ground, but autumn wins the war eventually.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot
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6-26-19 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-27-2019, 09:15 AM
RE: 6-26-19 - by busker - 06-27-2019, 09:53 AM
RE: 6-26-19 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-27-2019, 10:26 AM
RE: 6-26-19 - by Seraphim - 06-29-2019, 11:19 AM



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