06-29-2019, 11:19 AM
I like concept, but not sure if personification works in haiku. So we’ll call it something else lol.
I see it as kind of a green leaf vs brown leaf thing. A lot of dead soldiers fall to ground, but autumn wins the war eventually.
I see it as kind of a green leaf vs brown leaf thing. A lot of dead soldiers fall to ground, but autumn wins the war eventually.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot

