06-29-2019, 08:13 AM
So, I really struggle with endings. I can't seem to bring a poem to any point of great significance, or even slight drama. Honestly, this experience was queer, queer enough to stick around for a year.
Thank you for your critique, you were as helpful as ever. I'm trying to break out of older habits. It was exciting to see relevant pauses suggested, because I tend to over-punctuate, based on past feedback.
As for the post-script - like I said, a thin figure.
Safdar Hashmi Marg is a street in Central Delhi, and the state house mentioned here is called Himachal Bhawan. It's a state bhawan, a place where state officials are based out of in the national capital region. A literal translation is state house.
Thank you for your critique, you were as helpful as ever. I'm trying to break out of older habits. It was exciting to see relevant pauses suggested, because I tend to over-punctuate, based on past feedback.
As for the post-script - like I said, a thin figure.
Safdar Hashmi Marg is a street in Central Delhi, and the state house mentioned here is called Himachal Bhawan. It's a state bhawan, a place where state officials are based out of in the national capital region. A literal translation is state house.
The Chronicles of Lethargia