06-26-2019, 08:06 AM
This poem was something you wrote to her 5 years ago. I'm assuming the flower reference was something she would have understood (or did understand if you showed it to her). Perhaps I'm just a romantic, but I wouldn't see this change under the circumstances.
I'm thinking there's a second poem to be working on, rather than modifying this one.
I'm thinking there's a second poem to be working on, rather than modifying this one.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot