06-25-2019, 06:48 PM
Thanks Seraphim for your comments.
'Uncertainties' was a last minute change, the original title was 'Three Types Of Cloud'. There is uncertainty in the poem but I was trying to capture the mood I was in.
My ex-lover is in Bulgaria and I did offer to go over and see her but she refused, she is very ill and said it would be too sad.
She recently said goodbye and I fear she may have entered hospital for the last time. We are both 72 and she has been ill from emphysema for some time.
I wrote this about 5 years ago.
'Uncertainties' was a last minute change, the original title was 'Three Types Of Cloud'. There is uncertainty in the poem but I was trying to capture the mood I was in.
My ex-lover is in Bulgaria and I did offer to go over and see her but she refused, she is very ill and said it would be too sad.
She recently said goodbye and I fear she may have entered hospital for the last time. We are both 72 and she has been ill from emphysema for some time.
I wrote this about 5 years ago.

