06-23-2019, 11:33 AM
Messes up the rhyme scheme lol.
Actually, I get the feeling the allegory is not coming through, judging by responses here, and if I’ve failed in that aspect, then the poem’s a wipe. I’m not blaming the critiquers, I’m blaming me. It’s the authorks responsibility to communicate the message, and I feel I’ve failed in respect.
Actually, I get the feeling the allegory is not coming through, judging by responses here, and if I’ve failed in that aspect, then the poem’s a wipe. I’m not blaming the critiquers, I’m blaming me. It’s the authorks responsibility to communicate the message, and I feel I’ve failed in respect.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot