Beyond Recall

[Seraphim]

Thanks for the kind words. I agree, in the end it’s always the author's decision. But trying out new ideas, I think, never hurts, even if one goes back to a previous revision. So I’ll experiment, and if I don’t use ideas, I’ll try to explain to the critter why I chose not to.

I’m on the fence about ‘soak of sweat’ as well, although it implies something post-coital. But thought I’d run it up the flagpole and see what happens.