Beyond Recall

Beyond Recall

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06-23-2019, 06:10 AM

(06-23-2019, 05:31 AM)churinga Wrote: A sonetto then?

It's two octet stanzas of iambic pentameter, except for last line each stanza is iambic dimeter. I don't think there's an official name for it.

Revision above.

knot

I made some changes based on your observations. Others I did not, because I felt they worked against the allegory, not supported it.

Your time is appreciated. Any other observations are welcome.

There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot

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Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-22-2019, 04:12 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-22-2019, 07:47 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-22-2019, 09:09 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-22-2019, 03:50 PM

RE: Beyond Recall - by Knot - 06-23-2019, 12:09 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 02:41 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-23-2019, 05:31 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 06:10 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-23-2019, 07:34 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 08:00 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-23-2019, 09:54 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 11:33 AM

RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-23-2019, 02:32 PM

RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-24-2019, 04:29 AM

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