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Beyond Recall
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06-22-2019, 03:50 PM
On second reading I think the ending works well. It does have a volte. One thing a meteorologist my pick you up on, fog and mist are two different things caused by two different conditions but since this isn't a weather report I think it's OK. I did worry about 'transient vapor' simply because the image of fog/mist started to feel over-used.
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Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-22-2019, 04:12 AM
RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-22-2019, 07:47 AM
RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-22-2019, 09:09 AM
RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-22-2019, 03:50 PM
RE: Beyond Recall - by Knot - 06-23-2019, 12:09 AM
RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 02:41 AM
RE: Beyond Recall - by churinga - 06-23-2019, 05:31 AM
RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 06:10 AM
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RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 08:00 AM
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RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-23-2019, 11:33 AM
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RE: Beyond Recall - by Seraphim - 06-24-2019, 04:29 AM
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