Lessons from the Fen
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Lessons from the Fen (revision)


An acorn drops
ripples a moss-filled pond
- my son’s first smile.


Monarchs emerge
navigating the sedge
- hesitant steps.


A rabbit trembles
- concealed beneath the mist
the crouching fox.

Frost-crusted marsh
bullfrogs burrowed in mud
- crane’s parting cry.




Lessons from the Fen



An acorn drops,
ripples the moss-filled pond
- my son’s first smile.

Rain massages,
softens the compact loam
- hesitant steps.

A rabbit trembles
- concealed beneath the mist
the crouching fox.

Frost-crusted marsh
bullfrogs burrowed in mud
- crane’s parting cry.

There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot
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Lessons from the Fen - by Seraphim - 06-20-2019, 01:07 AM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by Tiger the Lion - 06-20-2019, 03:36 AM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by Seraphim - 06-20-2019, 04:19 AM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by billy - 06-20-2019, 03:45 PM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by Seraphim - 06-21-2019, 12:35 AM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by billy - 06-21-2019, 10:33 AM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by Seraphim - 06-21-2019, 12:03 PM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by billy - 06-21-2019, 03:03 PM
RE: Lessons from the Fen - by Seraphim - 06-22-2019, 07:07 AM



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