Appetizing
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No nits to pick that I see. ‘Which’ seems grammatically/contextually accurate, referring to ‘good comapny’. Certainly wouldn’t delete the comma. Well done.
There is no escape from metre; there is only mastery. TS Eliot
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Appetizing - by dukealien - 06-11-2019, 06:30 AM
RE: Appetizing - by CRNDLSM - 06-11-2019, 06:47 AM
RE: Appetizing - by dukealien - 06-11-2019, 09:59 PM
RE: Appetizing - by Seraphim - 06-20-2019, 12:15 AM



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